On a cold Monday morning in C 708 (November 3rd)

Today in class, we began by discussing successful aspects of this model draft — please open the document to see versions of the comments we made about it:

essay 2, sample draft, with our comments

Here’s an improvement we made to the introduction:

improved statement of problem, 11 3 14

paraphrasing model

Next, you all signed up for one-on-one conferences with me. Some of you met with me during Monday’s class:

monday 11 3 sign up

The rest of the members of the class will meet with me on Wednesday:

wed sign up 11 5 14

Please remember: your final revised draft is due no later than midnight on Friday, November 7th. Please upload it to My Reviewers under “project 2, final draft.”

**For next class–please read through the end of Alone Together.

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